Talk:Aria (manga)/GA1

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Link20XX (talk · contribs) 13:51, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey I will be reviewing this article, though this article is huge so it will definitely take awhile. Link20XX (talk) 13:51, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@0qd: Hello and thanks for your good article nomination. Unfortunately, this article does not meet the good article criteria. Here is why:

• The Nozomi page doesn't call the series a science-fiction
  • It does, but under the "Details" tab. I've adjusted the URL to match it exactly to prevent confusion.
• Reference 17, 26, and 27 give url errors
  • Fixed 17 and 27. 26 does not give a URL error, perhaps you had the wrong ref number?
• Anna, Ayumi K. Jasmine, and Azusa B. McLaren, Atora Monteverdi, Anzu Yumeno, and Anya Dostoyevskaya's voice actors are not cited.
  • Fixed.
• This needs a source: Her name comes from Lewis Carroll, author of Alice in Wonderland.
  • Removed this part as I can't find a source and it's not exactly relevant to the character in the first place.
• "Aqua and Aria were adapted by Hal Film Maker as a 54-episode anime television series comprising two seasons titled Aria the Animation and Aria the Natural, an original video animation (OVA) titled Aria the OVA: Arietta, and a third season titled Aria the Origination. The series was directed by Junichi Sato with character designs by Makoto Koga, and broadcast on the TV Tokyo Network between 2005 and 2008." That entire section is not cited
  • Fixed.
• The infobox says Siren Visual released it in Australia, but that isn't mentioned in Media?
  • Added.
• Ref 108 is a not found link
  • Fixed.
• This line needs a Citation: "Additional drama CDs were included as bonus materials for each volume of Aria Perfect Guide."
  • Fixed.
• Reference 147 is a not found link
  • I believe you meant 146, as 147 is in fact a working link. Fixed.
• On Reference 43, use the cite tweet formula instead of just a link
  • Fixed.
• For the non-English licenses, sources 92-93, 94-95, 96-97, 98-99, 103-104, and 115-116 are the same source two times in a row, which is unnecessary
  • I believe these are necessary as Aqua and Aria were both licensed separately, yet are part of the same franchise. Aqua was the precursor to Aria.

• No sources are needed in the lead
  • Fixed.
• Tankoban should be italicized
  • Fixed.
• You don't need a source to show the manga is in the Shonen demographic, thats determined by the magazine
  • Fixed.
• Aria the Benedizione project should be in the infobox
  • Added. I didn't add it before due to quite literally no information being revealed about it as of yet, but I added it by your advice.
• President Hime M. Granzchesta doesn't have an English voice actor listed
  • They did not have an English voice actor.
• the bottom paragraph should be above the licenses, and the part about the Italian broadcast should be in the same paragraph but below the English licenses
  • Believe I fixed it, but confused as to what you mean. Can you check?
• Radio CDs section has a "when" tag.
  • Fixed. 144 cites the date.

Unfortunately, for the reasons listed above, this article does not pass this review. Despite that, the Story, Development, Terms and other plot summaries in the article are truly spectacular and some of the best written stuff I've read on Wikipedia. So don't get discouraged; you definitely have made improvements, just not enough yet. If you need help with researching or anything else of the sort, you can reach me on my talk page and I will happily help out. You may renominate this article in the future once it has been improved to meet the criteria, and if you do I will gladly review it again. Link20XX (talk) 19:05, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• @Link20XX: Thank you for your review, Link. I greatly appreciate how painstakingly you looked at the article as I feel it's helped to greatly improve its quality. I've renominated the article and would like to take you up on your offer to re-review it if you're available. Thank you. 0qd (talk) 20:57, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]