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User:DKaplan007/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?

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The Electric Boogaloos

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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I chose this article because I've never heard of The Electric Boogaloos and wanted to learn about them while evaluating the article. The article itself is quite sparse in information especially for a crew who is " responsible for the spread of popping and electric boogaloo".

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Review by Dkaplan007

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An interesting article on a seemingly important piece of boogaloo and popping history, but the page seems to be unfinished with important information missing.

  • There are no pictures in the Wiki Page at all, even though photographs and videos of their performances are readily available from trusted sources all over the internet
  • There are Youtube videos of their performance, but they only appear as External Sources with no confirmation that the recordings are authentic
  • The article is built on only 5 sources, which isn't a significant amount to construct a reliable article
  • The sources themselves are trustworthy, including the Arts Council England and an archive from Electric Boogaloo's now defunct website
  • The Electric Boogaloo website was created by the crew, and might included exaggerated details that the band added to promote themselves
  • The section on "Members of the Band" is quite convoluted with information on all the members being compressed into one paragraph, I would recommend to split it up by member for readability purposes
  • If information is available, I would add a "History" section on the formation and the eventual disintegration of the crew, and a "Public Reception" section to add context
  • The opening line of the crew being "responsible for the spread of popping and electric boogaloo" is unsubstantiated and needs a source or, preferably, sources
  • The article is updated frequently with the earliest update being made in 2013 and the current last one being in 2024