Not bad for a full-length erotic novel. Erotica seems to be a genre that doesn't lend itself well to long works; you'll notice almost all of it takes the format of collections of short stories. This one does a fairly good job of keeping the reader's interest over the course of the full length. While there were some instances of kludgy writing ("she opened the door with great force" was one that stuck out to me), it had enough going for it to keep me reading. My favorite part might've been the boxing gym. Are there really places where hot lesbians go at it in the ring and then have sweaty, aggressive sex in the locker room afterwards? I hope so. ;) ( )