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Patriotism by Yukio Mishima
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On -isms
It seems that I had some issues with this novella. And the reasons, as usual, are completely personal and thus, irrelevant to your reading experience.
Beyond tradition, beliefs, fear and indignation at the imminent prospect of Imperial troops attacking Imperial troops, I can't find a story breathtakingly infused with romanticism. I can't relate to the concept of patriotism. To a sort of world citizen, the attachment to a portion of land is somewhat feeble. Why I came here, I know not; where I shall go it is useless to inquire, says Lord Byron in his Letters and Journals; something about this made me think of that quote. My connections (abstractions to which I aspire, at least) are with people, not with theories involving nationality, and I'm against any kind of generalization that such notion engenders. Certain values and beliefs, the religion I was raised in – the first origin, a matter of geography. I still can’t feel pride for the doings of chance or let's say even fate, juggling with the concept of a plan designed by someone else.
The degeneration of patriotism is a debate for another time, so I will refrain from expanding on nationalism and such, a reality that it is being forced on many of us, now more than ever.
In any case, patriotism might be foreign language. I dislike most terms which end in the suffix -ism that don't involve my favorite writers.


On licking blades and finding it remotely erotic
Another issue – the real theme in this novella – which prevented me from greatly enjoying this story was the excessive fascination for the concept of death, the morbid enchantment by the blade which was juxtaposed to a sense of beauty and sensuality; elements that when combined, I usually fail to identify with. The leitmotifs of this story, and of its creator’s life. I watched a part of a documentary a couple of days ago where the narrator explained how Mishima’s last actions in the form of a coup might have been, above all, an excuse to achieve the aesthetic death he always dreamed of. The last artistic manifestation of will.

It struck him as incredible that, amidst this terrible agony, things which could be seen could still be seen, and existing things existed still.

On writing
A brief yet tough read. Despite the lack of connection between the story and me, the beauty of Mishima's prose remained intact. I’m more and more impressed by the care with which he described the remarkable, the inconsequential, by means of his contemplative and delectable writing. The scenes of love between husband and wife were beautifully portrayed. Regardless of my thoughts on the subject, with the precision of a surgeon, the author associated the concepts of patriotism and death with a sense of eroticism, until they were one single reality. The beauty of skin. The brutality of blood. The rite of love and death.
I failed again.

Thus, so far from seeing any inconsistency or conflict between the urges of his flesh and the sincerity of his patriotism, the lieutenant was even able to regard the two as parts of the same thing.

On myths
The red string bringing these characters together.¹ At one point, one is honestly thinking how the sublimity of love actually feels, the act of giving oneself fully. Unreservedly. Sharing perspectives on life. Breathing somebody else’s air. Thinking about words to express feelings. Voicing those words. Not knowing what to do at the thought of the absence of such words. Following the fate of those words. And then, the fear. He who gives himself up like a prisoner of war must give up his weapons as well.² And deprived of any defense, not convinced by the fusion of words, voices and individuality, the fracture of self, the fear of loss, the constant feeling of being another one’s burden, one stops thinking about it, until the next day. I imagine it might be simpler to make decisions when people return their gaze and silence is no longer a wall.


On random thoughts
This novella became even more vivid once I watched Yūkoku, a 1966 short film “produced, directed, acted and written by Yukio Mishima.” I watched it at night. A sleepless night. The night the bell jar broke.³

With regard to Mishima’s works, nothing is ever certain. This is the third book I read by him – apart from two short stories. Fortunately, I don’t know what to expect, but I already look forward to the wonders of the second volume of his tetralogy. I long for another deep contemplation of my reactions to every one of his words.






1. Allusion to a review of Anna Karenina
2. Milan Kundera, The Unbearable Lightness of Being, Part Three: Words Misunderstood
3. I wrote this the same night I wrote something about The Bell Jar
4. Oh, who's going to read this far.

Feb 02, 17
* Also on my blog.
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Reading Progress

October 28, 2015 – Shelved
January 29, 2017 – Started Reading
January 30, 2017 –
21.0% "Having trouble connecting with this so far; selfishly lacking patriotic roots (the title was a hint, I know), not being able to relate to a fascination with death."
January 30, 2017 –
60.0% "Savoring the warmth glowing within themselves, they lay still and recalled the ecstasies they had just known. Each moment of the experience was relived. They remembered the taste of kisses which had never wearied, the touch of naked flesh, episode after episode of dizzying bliss. But already, from the dark boards of the ceiling, the face of death was peering down."
February 1, 2017 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

You truly infatuated me with all those beautiful quotes by Mishima you posted, Florencia. Fortunately I was able to get to some of his books, so now I can't wait for them to appear on my reading-schedule during this year. Thank you so much for inspiration my dear! :)


message 2: by flo (last edited Feb 01, 2017 05:01PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Scarlett wrote: "You truly infatuated me with all those beautiful quotes by Mishima you posted, Florencia. Fortunately I was able to get to some of his books, so now I can't wait for them to appear on my reading-sc..."

That's wonderful, Scarlett! I'm glad those quotes piqued your interest. Being my third Mishima, I wasn't able to connect with this book as much as I wanted (I'm writing down some thoughts that perhaps will become a review or something), but his writing is gorgeous and full of meaning. The first volume of his tetralogy left me speechless. I look forward to your thoughts on his books when you get to them. :)


message 3: by Praj (new)

Praj Excellent review !! I really liked how you sectioned your analysis of the book bringing in a wholesome comparable aspect to it.I reckon Mishima's books reflect his own external and internal turmoil at that particular point on his life. And, you are quite right about Mishima's works. His literature is as uncertain as Mishima himself was. Thanks !


message 4: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 11, 2017 09:32AM) (new)

the morbid enchantment by the blade which was juxtaposed to a sense of beauty and sensuality; elements that when combined, I usually fail to identify with

You disclose some of my own misgivings about Mishima's works with your absolutely eloquent critique, and he does come off as odd and trite if not contrived with his ideas sometimes. I also love the fact how you didn't decide to linger on the ideological aspects(often heavy-handed and preachy) solely as they could've been taken but rather put forth your empathy as the vantage point. I cannot wait for your thoughts on Runaway Horses where Mishima employs the same themes as here subtracting the overarching aspect of love, and explores them at large. Thank you for this!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Forgive me, my dear, if I am too emotioanlly drained for this evening to kick my imagination and make it come up with some colourful adjectives to your review. Sometimes simple words are for the best, so I hope you'll know what I mean when I say that I enjoyed your analysis profoundly and loved every bit of it. Thank you <3


message 6: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Praj wrote: "Excellent review !! I really liked how you sectioned your analysis of the book bringing in a wholesome comparable aspect to it.I reckon Mishima's books reflect his own external and internal turmoil..."

Strangely, I had Montaigne's essays in mind (which I meant to start reading slowly but never came back to him, so I've been feeling a bit guilty), so this sort of review came out with the spirit of an essay, though nothing compared to Montaigne's brilliance... needless to say. Just the titles. :P Many thanks for reading, Praj! Glad you liked this.


message 7: by Fionnuala (new)

Fionnuala Certain values and beliefs, the religion I was raised in – the first origin, a matter of geography. I still can’t feel pride for the doings of chance

Well, said, Florencia.
And I liked the subtitles. Essay reviews suit you!


message 8: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Jean-Paul wrote: "Stellar review, Florencia! For the short time we have known each other, I have become accustomed to your divinely lyrical musings and was equally delighted to discover your cutting dissection of th..."

From different connections with books emerge different kinds of reviews, it seems. :P Lyrical reviews perhaps come to the surface when the connection with the book is unbearably powerful and I'm under a special atmosphere created by classical music. Other reviews are written in silence, or even with sitcoms or TV series as background sound! But even then when I'm writing, and I presumptuously think I'm in my element, I belong nowhere, and everywhere either way. I only see roots in trees, and despite everything, I find it quite liberating.
Thanks so much for your unfaltering kindness and encouraging words, Jean-Paul!


message 9: by Lisa (new)

Lisa Great review, Florencia! I share your strong dislike for most -isms, especially the one with patriot as a prefix!


message 10: by Ray (new)

Ray Super review, an erudite and engaging effort, personal and profound


message 11: by Alejandro (new)

Alejandro Idealism...ic review! :P I think even the personal reasons are part of the overall reading experience since we can't avoid to be persons while we are reading ;) So, if the book seemed that it wasn't as good as you may expect, maybe it's simply because it's so, and if not, you were honest in your review, and that was what really counts at the end ;)


message 12: by Anu (new)

Anu I've only barely heard of Mishima, and I haven't ever heard of this book, but can I just say, this is one of the most absolutely wonderful reviews, nay...pieces of writing I've ever read?


message 13: by Dolors (new)

Dolors This review is as incisive as the double-edged beauty of Mishima's writing, Flo. Great thoughts, most of which I find myself agreeing with, on style, themes and symbolism.
I have only read The Sound of Waves, which I know is not representative of Mishima's obsession with beauty and death, but I recognize the extreme quality of his passions in your eloquent critique.


message 14: by Seemita (new)

Seemita Hmm... Despite your mixed reaction (and visible disinclination to discuss the -isms), you raise some pertinent issues here, Flor. And yes, keeping them aside for a rainy evening, I much like how you round up the various levers of Mishima's writing in the light of his own ambitions viz-a-viz the culture's in which his life was imbued. It is a bang-for-the-buck review! :)


message 15: by flo (last edited Feb 13, 2017 06:51AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Waqas wrote: "the morbid enchantment by the blade which was juxtaposed to a sense of beauty and sensuality; elements that when combined, I usually fail to identify with

You disclose some of my own misgivings ab..."


It's always quite a task to review something in front of a connoisseur of someone's work! In this case, Mishima's books. Thanks so much for your gracious words, a comment brimming with insight and beautifully written, as ever. I wanted to like this novella, obviously, but I had to be honest, so I didn't give it an extra star just because of the author's name - very hard! But if I didn't love it, I didn't love it... As soon as I finish Death in Midsummer (which I'm enjoying but for other reasons), I'll read another book (found a Japanese poet; besides ancient haiku, haven't read anything else), and then continue with Mishima's tetralogy. Thanks for reading. :)


message 16: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Scarlett wrote: "Forgive me, my dear, if I am too emotioanlly drained for this evening to kick my imagination and make it come up with some colourful adjectives to your review. Sometimes simple words are for the be..."

Adjectives are not necessary. :P Thanks so much for your kind words, Scarlett!


message 17: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Fionnuala wrote: "Certain values and beliefs, the religion I was raised in – the first origin, a matter of geography. I still can’t feel pride for the doings of chance

Well, said, Florencia.
And I liked the subtit..."


Books like this one inspire many juicy debates, especially now. Thanks for your comment, Fionnuala.


message 18: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Lisa wrote: "Great review, Florencia! I share your strong dislike for most -isms, especially the one with patriot as a prefix!"

I agree, Lisa, that prefix can be dangerously unpredictable. Thanks for your comment!


message 19: by withdrawn (new)

withdrawn Yes -isms are a problem. They are too broad. They contain too many other concepts. No -ism is a simple concept in itself. It cannot stand on its own but must reach out and take too many other things into itself and, in so doing, makes of itself some big clumsy thing that cannot be grasped by an honest person. An honest person must forego the -isms. So let us take a vow never to grasp an -ism, never to speak or write an -ism as anything other than someone else's error. As anyone else's lie. :-)

A good review Florencia. Thanks.


message 20: by Matthias (new)

Matthias Beautiful review that makes one think, Florencia! I recently saw a ranking of countries that were sorted according to the percentage of their population that was willing to fight (and possibly die, but pmaybe that was not added in the questionnaire) in the name of the -ism here discussed. I was not surprised and quite pleased to find my own country dangling somewhere below, but even 16 percent looked like a high number to me. But what Jean-Paul mentioned seemd important to me. Everyone needs a certain sense of belonging. It's a pity that that need also seems to come with a need to exclude others just to reinforce that sense of belonging. Flags are very good at speaking to that particular market. For the worse.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Florencia wrote: "Waqas wrote: "the morbid enchantment by the blade which was juxtaposed to a sense of beauty and sensuality; elements that when combined, I usually fail to identify with

You disclose some of my own..."


(found a Japanese poet; besides ancient haiku, haven't read anything else)

Interesting! And who are they? I also got my hands on this collection but I am trying not read it. Glad to know that you are liking Death in Midsummer; and I am far from a connoisseur on Mishima but reading reviews like this will surely make me one. It's little true though that when we become too familiar with an artist, we are, to some degree, able to see some flaws that are too weak to survive against our scrutiny(if there are any).


message 22: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Ray wrote: "Super review, an erudite and engaging effort, personal and profound"

Thanks so much for reading, Ray.


message 23: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Alejandro wrote: "Idealism...ic review! :P I think even the personal reasons are part of the overall reading experience since we can't avoid to be persons while we are reading ;) So, if the book seemed that it wasn'..."

I know. I value more an honest review than a compliant one just because one doesn't want to disagree with the ruling opinion. Thanks for your wonderful comment, Alejandro!


message 24: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Anuradha wrote: "I've only barely heard of Mishima, and I haven't ever heard of this book, but can I just say, this is one of the most absolutely wonderful reviews, nay...pieces of writing I've ever read?"

*blushes* Perhaps after reading this, you'll feel a little more inclined to read some of his marvelous works someday. Many thanks for your kind words, Anu. :)


message 25: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Dolors wrote: "This review is as incisive as the double-edged beauty of Mishima's writing, Flo. Great thoughts, most of which I find myself agreeing with, on style, themes and symbolism.
I have only read [book:T..."


I'm glad you agree with some thoughts, that means I'm not so out of touch with reality. :P Thanks so much for your wonderful words. If the book you mentioned (which was already on my TBR) doesn't involve said overwhelming fascination with death, then that would be a fine change of pace!


message 26: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Seemita wrote: "Hmm... Despite your mixed reaction (and visible disinclination to discuss the -isms), you raise some pertinent issues here, Flor. And yes, keeping them aside for a rainy evening, I much like how yo..."

Certainly, this book makes one ponder so many things besides the lieutenant and his wife's story, and which are intrinsically connected with reality nowadays. Yes, I happen to disagree with some; in that sense, not even Mishima's delectable writing helped me enjoy this more. Thanks for your lovely comment. :)


message 27: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo RK-ique wrote: "Yes -isms are a problem. They are too broad. They contain too many other concepts. No -ism is a simple concept in itself. It cannot stand on its own but must reach out and take too many other thing..."

Now I think about my shelves named after my favorite authors and feel a little guilty! But they are completely innocuous, when comparing them to the real -isms of our lives. The ones involving a dangerous melange of concepts, as you rightly say. Thank you for such thoughtful comment.


message 28: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Matthias wrote: "Beautiful review that makes one think, Florencia! I recently saw a ranking of countries that were sorted according to the percentage of their population that was willing to fight (and possibly die,..."

Every place is tinged with imperfection, just like we are, naturally. I do have a sense of belonging but I don't mind the place (within the realm of reason, of course! there are risky places in this world). It's extrapolated to smaller things. As long as I have my things, my books, my bed, my coffee maker, whether it's in Argentina or England, I don't mind, and the reasons would bore everybody so I'll refrain. I've heard people saying "I can't imagine not living here", that's wonderful; I'm just a little indifferent to that.
Very interesting to know about that ranking and your country's position; a significant number, yet not an alarming one, fortunately. Thanks so much for your comment, Matthias.


message 29: by flo (last edited Feb 15, 2017 02:08PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Waqas wrote: "Florencia wrote: "Waqas wrote: "the morbid enchantment by the blade which was juxtaposed to a sense of beauty and sensuality; elements that when combined, I usually fail to identify with

You discl..."


Kenji Miyazawa, this collection: Miyazawa Kenji: Selections. I'm trying to read more literature from other countries, but when I found this poet, I remembered how I haven't read any modern Japanese poetry, so I had to add it to my in-mmxvii shelf. I also saw that Hiraide wrote For the Fighting Spirit of the Walnut; even though I didn't enjoy his novella that much, I thought of taking a look at his poetry as well.
Ono no Komachi & Co. :D Glad you found it. I also have it. I'm going to need a lot of poetry after Cioran's gloomy (and insufferably melodramatic at times) outlook on life. Are you planning on reading it soon?


Sidharth Vardhan Amazing review, Florencia. And some of the comments above are brilliant. What Mathias said rings true to me, the need for sense of security which comes from believing in an idea higher than oneself and belonging to it is in everyone. All such ideas are, unfortunately, fictional. This security that believing in such ideas give is that of a moth which has found flame worth burning for - attractive yes but false and self-destructive. Indulging in a bit of fiction isn't wrong but most people get so addicted to them that they end up loving these abstract ideas over real humans.


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Florencia wrote: "Waqas wrote: "Florencia wrote: "Waqas wrote: "the morbid enchantment by the blade which was juxtaposed to a sense of beauty and sensuality; elements that when combined, I usually fail to identify w..."

It's very inspiring to see you reading multitude of genres. Since your mentioned collections have piqued my interest, I am definitely adding them and honestly I didn't even plan to read Japanese poetry, but now I feel like why not, so thanks for that! As for Ono no Komachi & Co, I am letting it stay on my shelves for now, but if you have some plan then you know . . . ;)


message 32: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Sidharth wrote: "Amazing review, Florencia. And some of the comments above are brilliant. What Mathias said rings true to me, the need for sense of security which comes from believing in an idea higher than oneself..."

Many thanks for sharing your opinion through a very eloquent comment, Sidharth. The metaphor of the moth was so fitting.
It's wonderful to see a book inspiring such thought-provoking comments.


message 33: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Waqas wrote: "Florencia wrote: "Waqas wrote: "Florencia wrote: "Waqas wrote: "the morbid enchantment by the blade which was juxtaposed to a sense of beauty and sensuality; elements that when combined, I usually ..."

Glad you considered reading those books someday. :) I finished Mishima's book so already started with Miyazawa's collection.
As for the women of the Ancient Court of Japan... I do have a plan, but don't want to interfere with yours! Visiting your review of said book now.


Gaurav Excellent review Florencia !!

I really like your analysis of the book with respect to different themes and aspects of writing; I share similar views about Patriotism, would have loved to read more of your opinion on it but let's leave it to some other time.

Mishima is a sort of artist who, to me, seemed to infuse the beauty with tragedy so effortlessly that it seems absolutely natural and his obsession with the idea of death is quite infatuating as the very idea of death is. Nevertheless, Mishima is still quite a virgin territory to me though very fascinating one and would love to read more of his books and thanks to you since because of you I got to know this Japanese beauty :)


message 35: by flo (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Gaurav wrote: "Excellent review Florencia !!

I really like your analysis of the book with respect to different themes and aspects of writing; I share similar views about Patriotism, would have loved to read more..."


Indeed, plenty of time to discuss politics! Thanks so much for your wonderful comment, Gaurav. Glad some views resonated with you.
Thanks for sharing so eloquently your impressions on Mishima's writing. Even if he's new territory, a spot-on comment. Thrilled to hear that you'll be reading more of his books! I'd love to hear your thoughts on them. I'll be starting the second volume of his tetralogy soon. His delectable prose can be quite addictive. :)


Gaurav Florencia wrote: "Gaurav wrote: "Excellent review Florencia !!

I really like your analysis of the book with respect to different themes and aspects of writing; I share similar views about Patriotism, would have lov..."


You're right Florencia, Mishima's prose is very addictive. I'll be looking forward to read your opinion on second volume of the tetralogy :)


message 37: by Tara (new)

Tara Intriguing analysis, Florencia. Nationalism is one of my least favorite isms. It is so frequently (and easily) utilized militarily for such blatantly horrifying destruction that I’m generally wary of anybody who tries to defend it. From what I’ve read of Mishima’s work so far, his obsession with a “beautiful death” often makes an appearance. I haven’t really minded that so far, but every now and then it can be a bit much. Another theme he excels at delineating is the, as you put it, “fracture of self”—a perfectly apt, and perfectly concise description :) Anyway, even though your account of his writing was somewhat tempting, I probably won’t pick this one up anytime soon. Maybe after I’ve finished the tetralogy. And as usual, it was a pleasure reading your musings.

P.S. I love your fourth footnote...and the fact that you put footnotes in a review! :D


message 38: by flo (last edited Mar 26, 2019 05:42PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

flo Tara wrote: "Intriguing analysis, Florencia. Nationalism is one of my least favorite isms. It is so frequently (and easily) utilized militarily for such blatantly horrifying destruction that I’m generally wary ..."

Haha, thanks. I use footnotes when the circumstances require it. This book is an example. I usually dislike what I write but I'm not so appalled at this review. I believe it actually makes some sense?
Mishima can be exhausting when it comes to his obsession with death; it might strike a chord when you're a teenager but it gets dull afterwards. Well, for me at least. His tetralogy has many interesting elements that he develops using such a poetic language, but it's also tiring, confusing and disgusting at times. I still have to write some reviews about it. But I'm in the mood for some Kawabata. I'm done with Mishima for now.
Thanks so much for your words, Tara. :)


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Cecily "I dislike most terms which end in the suffix -ism that don't involve my favorite writers."

Well said! This is a really thoughtful and enlightening review, albeit of a story I vehemently disliked.


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