User changes for Jorjulio

14 December 2024

• 18:3118:31, 14 December 2024 diff hist +424 Client Following first sentence, added the following one: "Each server, having received such a request, then makes a response to the client that contacted it." Further, immediately after the sentence "For example, a web browser is a client software.", added two more sentences. current
• 17:3117:31, 14 December 2024 diff hist +22 Ajax (programming) In second bullet item under "Good things", changed "small bits" to "small pieces of information". Also made "client" into a link. In third bullet item, set a comma after the "JSON" link. current
• 17:1417:14, 14 December 2024 diff hist +15 m Ajax (programming) In first bullet item under "Good things", changed the "the" in each parenthetical to "its". Also formatted "Programmers" as a link.
• 17:0417:04, 14 December 2024 diff hist +3 Ajax (programming) In first paragraph, changed "bits of information" to "pieces of information" to avoid ambiguity with the term "bit". Also, in last sentence, set a comma after "That way".
• 16:5916:59, 14 December 2024 diff hist +27 m Ajax (programming) Following first word in article ("AJAX"), added " (sometimes spelled "Ajax")", since both forms are used here (and elsewhere).

12 December 2024

• 12:2412:24, 12 December 2024 diff hist +166 Talk:Buddhism →"left on our own we are never truly happy": Reply current Tag: Reply
• 12:0012:00, 12 December 2024 diff hist +498 Talk:Buddhism →"left on our own we are never truly happy": new section Tag: New topic
• 11:4911:49, 12 December 2024 diff hist +59 Buddhism In second introductory paragraph, set a comma after "Over the centuries" and added "At least two major branches of practice and theory exist: " right before "Theravada Buddhism". current
• 11:3711:37, 12 December 2024 diff hist +4 m Buddhism In first sentence, set "the" before "Indian Subcontinent".

7 December 2024

• 22:0322:03, 7 December 2024 diff hist +16 m Server In last sentence before "Web server" heading, changed "a special ip number" to "an IP address, a special number"; also made "IP address" a link to the corresponding Wiki simple-English article.

25 November 2024

• 14:5914:59, 25 November 2024 diff hist −2 m Jesus Under the heading "The Holy Saviour", right after the text "These are three verses ... in this Christian belief", replaced ": -" with ":".
• 14:5014:50, 25 November 2024 diff hist +8 m Jesus In main text only, replaced " - " (space-hyphen-space) with " — " (space-em dash-space) to reflect standard use of dashes. I suggest same change be made everywhere where it won't "break things."
• 12:1112:11, 25 November 2024 diff hist +391 Talk:Christianity →number of followers (opening paragraphs): new section Tag: New topic

14 November 2024

• 11:5811:58, 14 November 2024 diff hist +859 Talk:Science →proposed changes to last paragraph of introduction: new section current Tag: New topic
• 11:4111:41, 14 November 2024 diff hist +302 Talk:Science →Untitled: Reply Tag: Reply

8 October 2024

• 19:5019:50, 8 October 2024 diff hist +7 m Guatemala Under "Population", changed first word ("It") to "Guatemala". current

22 September 2024

• 00:2400:24, 22 September 2024 diff hist +37 m Engineering In paragraph immediately under "Study", changed "working within a limited budget and materials" to "learning to work within limited budgetary and material constraints (limits)". current
• 00:1400:14, 22 September 2024 diff hist +3 m Engineering In first paragraph, changed "solve Technology problems" to "solve problems in technology".

17 August 2024

• 13:5813:58, 17 August 2024 diff hist +6 m Don Quixote In final sentence, in the parenthetical, changed "sane" to "being sane"). current

31 July 2024

• 17:1817:18, 31 July 2024 diff hist −5 Virtual machine In first sentence of article, changed "like it is" to "like" to simplify the style. In following sentence, set a comma immediately after the "hypervisor" link to separate the two independent clauses. In the third group of bulleted text at end, changed "such as" to "as with" right before "[[Java ...." current

24 April 2024

• 13:4713:47, 24 April 2024 diff hist +372 N Talk:Salat →consistency in capitalization: new section current Tag: New topic
• 13:3913:39, 24 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Salat At end of first paragraph, added a space after the comma in "plural,and Salah".
• 13:1613:16, 24 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Islam Under "Beliefs and Practices", in the sentence beginning "The Qur’an revealed to the Prophet", added "was" before "revealed".
• 13:0113:01, 24 April 2024 diff hist +783 Talk:Islam →"without submission" in 3rd paragraph ("Linguistically, ..."): new section current Tag: New topic

31 March 2024

• 21:5421:54, 31 March 2024 diff hist +226 Talk:Buddhism →word choice in "Three poisons" section: new section Tag: New topic

25 September 2022

• 00:1300:13, 25 September 2022 diff hist −1 m Science →Practical impacts of scientific research: In table, under "Impacts", first line, changed "dynamo's" to "dynamos".

24 September 2022

• 18:0518:05, 24 September 2022 diff hist +3 m Science →Scientific method: In second paragraph, second sentence, changed "He meant it tell the difference" to include "to" after "it".

15 August 2022

• 03:0303:03, 15 August 2022 diff hist +514 User talk:Jorjulio →textual query: "Telegraphy and bull other communication technologies": new section current Tag: New topic

20 July 2022

• 19:0519:05, 20 July 2022 diff hist +9 m Government Under "Democracy", second paragraph, added an apostrophe after "parties" in "parties access" to form correct possessive. Under "Aristocracy", after "would rule," added "whereas".
• 18:5618:56, 20 July 2022 diff hist −9 m Government Under "Monarchy", second paragraph, changed link "Netherland" to "Netherlands" and removed "<nowiki/>s".
• 18:4918:49, 20 July 2022 diff hist +64 m Government In second paragraph under "Democracy", added "(unfairly manipulate or interfere with)" after "rig" and "(classic, paradigmatic)" after "textbook".

21 May 2022

• 02:4502:45, 21 May 2022 diff hist +73 Unicode Edited the first three paragraphs for readability, punctuation, and spelling. Changed "e.g." to "for example", for example. Was careful not to change the semantic content in any important ways.

27 March 2021

• 23:1823:18, 27 March 2021 diff hist −5 m Spanish Civil War In final paragraph, in the sentence beginning "It was the first time ...", deleted "came" from end of sentence for grammatical correctness.

23 January 2021

• 05:5105:51, 23 January 2021 diff hist +12 m Application programming interface In second and third bullet items, changed "dev portal" to "developer portal".

11 January 2021

• 15:5115:51, 11 January 2021 diff hist +7 m Postmodernism In fifth paragraph of introduction, replaced "Postmodern art and literature commonly talks about itself and makes fun of itself. It makes" with "Postmodern art and literature commonly talk about themselves and make fun of themselves. They make". (Correcting subject-verb agreement.)

7 December 2020

• 02:5302:53, 7 December 2020 diff hist +2 m Sleep →Sleeping problems: Changed "what they have ate" to "what they have eaten".

6 December 2020

• 19:0719:07, 6 December 2020 diff hist +5 m Sleep Under heading "Brief stages of sleep", "Stage 4", changed "stage and brain waves" to "stage in which brain waves".
• 15:4615:46, 6 December 2020 diff hist +4 m Sleep Under heading "What sleep is for", last paragraph, added "but" between "Not only people sleep," and "all mammals".
• 15:4015:40, 6 December 2020 diff hist +1 m Sleep In fourth paragraph, set a space before the sentence "This is often called a nap." QUERY: Change immediately preceding "day" to "night"?
• 15:2815:28, 6 December 2020 diff hist +23 m Sleep In third paragraph of introduction, second and third sentences, changed "know for sure, though," to "know, however," and "Not having enough sleep" to "Sleep deprivation (not allowing a person enough sleep)".
• 15:1615:16, 6 December 2020 diff hist −2 m Sleep In second paragraph of introduction, fifth sentence ("Being sleep deprived ..."), changed "plethora" to "number".
• 15:0915:09, 6 December 2020 diff hist −3 m Sleep In second paragraph of introduction, third sentence ("Everyday activities, ..."), changed "themselves" to "oneself".
• 15:0315:03, 6 December 2020 diff hist +1 m Sleep In second paragraph of introduction, first sentence, changed "immensely critical" to "immensely important".
• 15:0115:01, 6 December 2020 diff hist +10 m Sleep In first paragraph of introduction, fifth sentence, inserted ", however, " directly after "They can".
• 14:5314:53, 6 December 2020 diff hist −48 m Sleep Removed the duplicated text "[change | change source]" from the headings "Brief stages of sleep" and "Bad habits".

8 August 2020

• 15:3615:36, 8 August 2020 diff hist +10 m Liver Under "Function" heading, changed "makes bile" to "produces (makes) bile". Removed extra space between "bright" and "yellow". Also changed links "serum amyloid a" to "serum amyloid A" and "Ammonia" to "ammonia".

7 June 2020

• 20:2620:26, 7 June 2020 diff hist +19 m Database →Uses for database systems: Changed "facilities of searching specific record in given data" to "facilities (tools) to search for specific records in a given set of data".
• 20:2120:21, 7 June 2020 diff hist +18 m Database Under "Ways to organize the data", changed all instances of "Dept" to "Department".
• 20:1820:18, 7 June 2020 diff hist −2 m Database Immediately under "Ways to organize the data", changed "Like" to "As".
• 20:0920:09, 7 June 2020 diff hist +35 m Database Under "Changing data", "the ACID principle", replaced "Known as" with "This is known as". Also set periods at end of first three bullet items.