Talk:Fred Binka

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Review: December 6, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. Reading Beans, Duke of Rivia 10:06, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Fred Binka/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Vanderwaalforces (talk · contribs) 13:49, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Reading Beans (talk · contribs) 15:52, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Looking forward to starting in on this review! As I go, I might fix minor things myself (and of course you can always revert/rewrite those changes) and make comments below with bigger concerns that I'll bounce back to you for edits. Best, Reading Beans, Duke of Rivia 15:52, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review

I want to believe that the lede has summarised the whole article and I don’t find anything that I could consider to be controversial, so, per LEADCITE, I’d recommend you remove the citations to avoid redundancy.
- done.--Vanderwaalforces (talk) 09:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
…as an epidemiologist and led fieldwork for the Ghana Vitamin A Supplementation Trials, a large-scale randomised controlled trial that studied the effects of vitamin A supplementation on child mortality and morbidity. Link epidemiologist and Vitamin A and any other obscure words in this paragraph.
- done.--Vanderwaalforces (talk) 09:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Is INDEPTH an acronym? If so, you can write the full meaning in its first mention.
- done.--Vanderwaalforces (talk) 09:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
He participated in ~~several~~ international committees and initiatives related to malaria and health development, such as the Multilateral Initiative on Malaria, the Global Alliance for Vaccines and Immunization, and the Mapping Malaria Risk in Africa project. I recommend to wikilink Global Alliance for Vaccines and Immunization.
- done.--Vanderwaalforces (talk) 09:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There’s really nothing much to do here. But wikilink obscure words.
- done.--Vanderwaalforces (talk) 09:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sources checks out. There’s no close paraphrasing here; CopyVio should names of institutions and words that cannot be worded in any other way. Authorship shows 99.5%.

Reading Beans, Duke of Rivia 07:09, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Reading Beans Done! Thanks for the checks and suggestions. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 09:38, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me. Good work! Reading Beans, Duke of Rivia 09:59, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.