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GA review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:47, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:33, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:33, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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  • and appeared in a total of four APFA games --> appearing in four APFA games
    • Done.
  • In the Early life section, you quote the "Marinette Eagle-Star" in the text, but the source is "Marinette Menominee EagleHerald"
    • The first quote is from the Eagle-Star (whose quote was mentioned in the EagleHerald), while the second comes from the Eagle-Herald. Thoughts?
  • be the team's only "outsider" that year the quote for just one word isn't necessary. You could just say "non-local"
    • Changed.
  • Did he not play in 1920?
    • He did. I changed the one sentence to He continued playing for the Packers in 1920. (I had accidentally put 1921 before)
  • References:
    • Spot checks: #1, #4, #7, #12 look good

That's all I got BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:52, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.