User contributions for Gerrit-Jan Berendijk

10:5610:56, 17 December 2022 diff hist +717 David Drumm →Conviction: added detail on the sentencing and trial conclusion Tag: Visual edit
10:5110:51, 17 December 2022 diff hist −802 David Drumm Removing references to "sneachta.org" which is another wiki site and does not meet the reliable sourcing rules of Wikipedia Tag: Visual edit

21:1021:10, 13 December 2022 diff hist +1,129 David Drumm Expansion of his career in Anglo before being CEO Tag: Visual edit

17:2217:22, 14 November 2022 diff hist −80 Ben Sasse Copyedits incl to lede on time and Florida presidency protest reasons Tag: Visual edit

07:5207:52, 22 October 2022 diff hist +42 m Conversations with Friends (TV series) Ce lede. It is broadcast on television Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

02:0102:01, 9 October 2022 diff hist +26 Stuart Olding Clarification of outcome Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

05:4505:45, 20 August 2022 diff hist −222 Aisling O'Loughlin The comparasion to nazis is not in the source. Need very strong sourcing to put nazi in a BLP article!! Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18:0418:04, 9 April 2022 diff hist +49 Séamus Woulfe Copyedit and clarify content of Denham report in lead Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:5817:58, 9 April 2022 diff hist +2 m Oireachtas Golf Society scandal Ce typos Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:5217:52, 9 April 2022 diff hist +343 Jerry Buttimer Restoration of the party whip Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:4717:47, 9 April 2022 diff hist +340 Paddy Burke Update FG whip restored to Burke in January 2021 Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:4317:43, 9 April 2022 diff hist +36 Jerry Buttimer Golfgate was not in breach of the guidelines Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15:2215:22, 7 April 2022 diff hist +3 m George Orwell Clarification of meaning: journalist for the Tribune and. Then at the BbC Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:1715:17, 7 April 2022 diff hist −468 George Orwell Removed adjectives for a more neutral tone. Citations are usually not needed in the lede and should not be to primary sources Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
08:5908:59, 7 April 2022 diff hist +211 Christopher Hitchens No need for "co-" prefix--the meaning is covered. Added additional biographical detail to the lede Tag: Visual edit

15:1715:17, 6 April 2022 diff hist −124 Oscar Wilde →Selected works: this is a "selected" i.e. short list. It does not list detail on editions of the same work, that can be included in the dedicated bibliography Tag: Visual edit
12:0312:03, 6 April 2022 diff hist −182 m Seán FitzPatrick →Arrests and acquittal: CE: Tightened up paragraph and combined clauses to remove repetition. No change in meaning Tag: Visual edit
11:4911:49, 6 April 2022 diff hist −32 m Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Mailing List Unsubscribe myself from mailing list.
09:5309:53, 6 April 2022 diff hist −14 User:Gerrit-Jan Berendijk No edit summary Tag: Visual edit: Switched
09:4809:48, 6 April 2022 diff hist +139 George Orwell Trimmed down the list of neologisms to the mostwell known. Included the others in a lower paragraph Tag: Visual edit
09:4309:43, 6 April 2022 diff hist +535 Talk:George Orwell →lede: expansion to include more biographical info in 3rd para: new section
09:4009:40, 6 April 2022 diff hist −7 m George Orwell ce: minor typos corrected Tag: Visual edit
09:3809:38, 6 April 2022 diff hist +775 George Orwell Significant expansion to the lede to better reflect the rest of the article. May need more wikilinking, or combination with some of the publications listed in the 2nd paragraph. Tag: Visual edit

16:5416:54, 21 March 2022 diff hist +260 Talk:Johann Hari No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16:5116:51, 21 March 2022 diff hist −7 Johann Hari Changed section title to more neutral heading. Remember this is a WP:BLP, not a pile on Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

09:5109:51, 18 March 2022 diff hist −89 Dara Calleary "centre of" to "implicated in". Removed unnecessary parantheses--this is not a journalist's CV Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
09:4509:45, 18 March 2022 diff hist +142 Dara Calleary Clarification on aftermath of golf scandal Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10:3710:37, 17 March 2022 diff hist +1,224 Séamus Woulfe Added conclusion to the Golfgate affair Tag: Visual edit
10:2710:27, 17 March 2022 diff hist +211 Oireachtas Golf Society scandal Added prosectution summary to lede Tag: Visual edit
10:2110:21, 17 March 2022 diff hist −1,715 Donie Cassidy Deleted paragraph under WP:OR and WP:BLP. Paragraph was two quotations from primary sources and pieced together to form original research, possibly intending to impugn the article's subject Tag: Visual edit
10:1910:19, 17 March 2022 diff hist +1,103 Donie Cassidy →Golfgate: Added conclusion to criminal trial Tag: Visual edit
10:1410:14, 17 March 2022 diff hist +747 Oireachtas Golf Society scandal →Criminal prosecution: Added further detail on the conclusion Tag: Visual edit
10:0810:08, 17 March 2022 diff hist +693 Noel Grealish →Oireachtas Golf Society scandal: added conclusion of the criminal trial Tag: Visual edit