Talk:Underneath the Tree

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Zanimum in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 21:27, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'll review. -- Zanimum (talk) 21:27, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Passing "Music video"; nice, re: copious. Passing "Live performances and usage in media", "Track listing", "Credits and personnel", "Charts", "Radio and release history", "See also".

Note that I review references last, so there may be references I might contest in any of the above sections. -- Zanimum (talk) 16:55, 23 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Without creating a grossly large heading of "Background, recording and composition", is there any way to merge those two sections? There's so little background, and they seem to flow into each other. Both sections are ready to go, otherwise. I don't need a merge, but if you can think of a logic subject header, it would be well worth it to merge them.

"filmed by film director Hamish Hamilton" is repetitive. Also, the only thing he does that is a "film" is concert films. I've changed it.

I still have to review the "References" section. -- Zanimum (talk) 00:38, 28 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

References are all solid. Good stuff! GA! -- Zanimum (talk) 17:39, 29 March 2014 (UTC)Reply