Talk:Tom Pope/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Glenn Oliver in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 14:59, 3 October 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'll take a look at this one. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 14:59, 3 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Crewe Alexandra

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Rotherham United

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Port Vale

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Return to Port Vale

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  • " to help Vale to pick up back-to-back wins for the first time in over a year". This needs a reference.
I just removed the first time in a year part as it's not important and the rest is in the reference.--EchetusXe 13:55, 10 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Personal life

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  • Refs 114, 115, and 116 don't seem to be working. Whenever I click on them it just takes me to a page saying Service Unavailable - DNS failure. Could alternative references be found if possible?
I did the wayback machine for all the dead links so they should be archived now.--EchetusXe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

References

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  • Ref 4 doesn't seem to be working. Could an alternative be found.
I did the wayback machine for all the dead links so they should be archived now.--EchetusXe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Ref 19 is no longer available on YouTube.
I removed it.--EchetusXe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Comments

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I think there it a bit of work to be done here so I'm putting this review on hold. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 10:35, 4 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Okay thanks!--EchetusXe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
Looks like we're almost done here. Once the last issue has been addressed I think this will be ready to pass. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 09:52, 9 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
Ah yeah, I forgot about that one.--EchetusXe 13:55, 10 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
OK then, looks like we're done here. Congrats. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 15:09, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

May I note one further problem?

The results of a Google search for -

Tom Pope - Port Vale

- return teaser text that says -

Current teams: Crewe Alexandra F.C.

Clearly this should be Port Vale F.C., but I cannot find the erroneous teaser text anywhere within the article text.

Glenn Oliver (talk) 13:03, 24 December 2020 (UTC)Reply