Talk:Tule Island/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:40, 7 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Comments

• Similar to the other small island article, this feels too short to be a good article but we'll go with the flow and see what we get.
  • I think it might be a stretch for this one; I scoured existing references pretty well, but I could try to come up with some more.
• "farm potatoes, which now consists mostly" perhaps "but which now" or "and which".
  •  Y Have copyedited this sentence a little.
• "USGS aerial imagery ..." fragment, no full stop.
  •  Y Fixed.
• " City of Stockton" why is "City" capitalised?
  •  Y No particularly good reason, fixed.
• "as a fishing location" you didn't link fishing in the lead?
  •  Y Sure, why not.
• "the 1959 musical" no need for that year.
  •  Y Fixed.
• "Fern-Headreach-Tule complex" what is that?
  •  Y Added some description in "Geography".
• "The Modesto Bee" The is part of the name.
  •  Y Fixed.
• "$5 to $6 million" maybe $5–6 million. And inflate.
  •  Y Done.
• Ref 6 SHOUTING.
  •  Y

Fixed. That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:09, 7 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: Well, there we go. jp×g 08:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply