Talk:Sheetal Sharma

Latest comment: 3 years ago by SierraTangoCharlie1 in topic individual citations

individual citations

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hi,
1. Wouldn't it be better to cite each statement as it is made, rather than have all citations clumped at the end of the paragraph? (Early life - education)
2. wrt his job at call center- it doesn't add much value wrt to his career as Bollywood Fashion Designer, I opine that part should be removed.
3. Shouldn't the entry about awards won at the beginning of the article be referenced? rather than referencing them by repetition only in the awards section? SierraTangoCharlie1 (talk) 19:20, 15 May 2021 (UTC)Reply