Talk:Lou Rash
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GA Review
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 00:03, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:02, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:02, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
Comments
edit- Maybe make a note on
was also a member of the Pittsburgh Steelers in the NFL and the Saskatchewan Roughriders and Toronto Argonauts in the Canadian Football League (CFL)
that although he was on their teams, he never played a game for them? - Change
about 18 pounds
toalmost 20 pounds
to better summarize the source at the position, and that he
no need for the comma- You don't need to repeat Canadian Football League since you defined it in the lead
and was considered to have impressed early at cornerback, although he eventually was released on June 18
-->and although it was noted he impressed at cornerback, he was released on June 18.
- Link to Free safety
- Ref spot check:
- Link Delta Democrat Times (Ref 3)
- Red link Beaver Dam Daily Citizen (Ref 17) (it is red linked at The Daily Citizen)
- Add access-dates to Ref 2, 4, 12
- References are consistently formatted and match what is being cited.
Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:33, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:26, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Nice work. Passed! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:34, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
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- ... that in his first year in the NFL, Lou Rash was told he was released and began flying back home, but was told upon landing that the release was a mistake and he was to return?
- Source: Was it a Rash decision?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alan Rosen (restaurant owner)
- Comment: QPQ to be done within 24 hours. Open to other ways of wording the hook.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:49, 29 October 2024 (UTC).
- Article was nominated seven days after it was promoted to GA so it meets that requirement. No close paraphrasing was found, a QPQ has been done, and the hook is interesting and cited inline. My main concern is that I'm not sure if the article meets WP:DYKCOMPLETE: is there no known information about him after his gridiron football career ended? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:49, 6 November 2024 (UTC)