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: I'd like to review this, but it will probably not happen today. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:02, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
: I'd like to review this, but it will probably not happen today. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:02, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
:: That's appreciated.--[[User:Farang Rak Tham|Farang Rak Tham]] ([[User talk:Farang Rak Tham|talk]]) 17:41, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
:: That's appreciated.--[[User:Farang Rak Tham|Farang Rak Tham]] ([[User talk:Farang Rak Tham|talk]]) 17:41, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
::: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Thank you for a substantial detailed article on excellent sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - Very minor questions. Hooks: I think ALT1 is more unusual, striking the other. The hook facts need a source imediately after the sentence, - there is one for 300.000, but not for the 700.000. The image is licensed. I added ''(pictured)''. I am not sure we can say "consists", while the image says "is carpeted". The image caption can be shorter. - Article: Sometimes an "and" combines things that don't belong together, such as "It was founded in 1970 by the maechi (nun) Chandra Khonnokyoong and Luang Por Dhammajayo and is the most well-known and the fastest growing temple of the Dhammakaya Movement." - Split sentence? "best-known" instead of "most well-known"? One image has no caption. - Consider to go for FAC after this. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:19, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
::: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Thank you for a substantial detailed article on excellent sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - Very minor questions. Hooks: I think ALT1 is more unusual, striking the other.
The hook facts need a source imediately after the sentence, - there is one for 300.000, but not for the 700.000.
The image is licensed. I added ''(pictured)''.
I am not sure we can say "consists", while the image says "is carpeted".
The image caption can be shorter.
Article: Sometimes an "and" combines things that don't belong together, such as "It was founded in 1970 by the maechi (nun) Chandra Khonnokyoong and Luang Por Dhammajayo and is the most well-known and the fastest growing temple of the Dhammakaya Movement." - Split sentence?
"best-known" instead of "most well-known"?
One image has no caption.
Consider to go for FAC after this. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:19, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
: I will look into the comments as soon as I can. I have taken the liberty of numbering the comments. I'll be back.--[[User:Farang Rak Tham|Farang Rak Tham]] ([[User talk:Farang Rak Tham|talk]]) 00:01, 11 February 2018 (UTC)


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Wat Phra Dhammakaya

A golden monument at Wat Phra Dhammakaya, consisting of a million Buddha images.
A golden monument at Wat Phra Dhammakaya, consisting of a million Buddha images.
  • ... that a new Buddhist temple started in the 1970s in Thailand, does now have three million followers worldwide? Source: "Dhammakaya is said to have three million followers, ..." (New York Times, 2017), Source: "When Wat Phra Dhammakaya was opened in 1977, Phra Dhammachayo was appointed abbot." (Mackenzie, 2007)
    • ALT1:... that the Thai temple Wat Phra Dhammakaya contains a large monument (pictured) that consists of a million Buddha images? Source: "There are 300,000 images encrusted on the dome and top terrace. 700.000 more within the cetiya." (Snodgrass, 2003, p.173), Source:"In keeping with the magnitude of this vision, Dhammakāya leaders have constructed a number of new buildings to accommodate and attract large numbers of practitioners: ... the Mahathammakai Chedi (Mahā Dhammakāya Cetiya), a massive stūpa with 1,000,000 golden Buddha images, which serves as a focus for communal ritual and devotion ... (Scott, 2009, p.102)
  • Reviewed: Alem Bekagn, Satan
  • Comment: (With regard to ALT1:) A DYK item about the same monument appeared on the German Wikipedia in 2013. That entry only mentioned the Buddhas on the dome, though.

Improved to Good Article status by Farang Rak Tham (talk) and Wikiman5676 (talk). Nominated by Farang Rak Tham (talk) at 23:25, 6 February 2018 (UTC).

I'd like to review this, but it will probably not happen today. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:02, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
That's appreciated.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 17:41, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
Thank you for a substantial detailed article on excellent sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - Very minor questions. Hooks: I think ALT1 is more unusual, striking the other.
  1. The hook facts need a source imediately after the sentence, - there is one for 300.000, but not for the 700.000.
  2. The image is licensed. I added (pictured).
  3. I am not sure we can say "consists", while the image says "is carpeted".
  4. The image caption can be shorter.
  5. Article: Sometimes an "and" combines things that don't belong together, such as "It was founded in 1970 by the maechi (nun) Chandra Khonnokyoong and Luang Por Dhammajayo and is the most well-known and the fastest growing temple of the Dhammakaya Movement." - Split sentence?
  6. "best-known" instead of "most well-known"?
  7. One image has no caption.

Consider to go for FAC after this. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:19, 10 February 2018 (UTC)

I will look into the comments as soon as I can. I have taken the liberty of numbering the comments. I'll be back.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:01, 11 February 2018 (UTC)