User contributions for Dolphin51

16 October 2024

• 21:3121:31, 16 October 2024 diff hist +1,062‎ User talk:Taffy boeing b 17 ‎ →Wing loading: new section current Tag: New topic
• 12:0112:01, 16 October 2024 diff hist 0‎ m SZD-24 Foka ‎ →Description (SZD-24-4A ): Eliminated unnecessary capital letters in section headings. current
• 00:4500:45, 16 October 2024 diff hist −1‎ m John D. Anderson ‎ Reverted incorrect spelling of subject’s name by 131.111.5.145 (talk) current Tag: Undo

14 October 2024

• 20:1420:14, 14 October 2024 diff hist +5‎ Schleicher ASW 19 ‎ →Variants: Syntax and Wikilink current
• 11:0911:09, 14 October 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Heat ‎ →Planck (1926): Changed “to” into “too”.
• 09:1209:12, 14 October 2024 diff hist 0‎ HMAS Yarra ‎ →top: Updated current status of M87 current
• 06:4406:44, 14 October 2024 diff hist +4‎ John Lear ‎ →Aviator career: Syntax. “tuition in the stock market”?
• 05:2505:25, 14 October 2024 diff hist +551‎ Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Indexes ‎ →Red links: new section current Tag: New topic

13 October 2024

• 21:3521:35, 13 October 2024 diff hist +1‎ John Rossiter ‎ →top: Chronological order current
• 11:1811:18, 13 October 2024 diff hist −15‎ TWA Flight 800 ‎ Revised summary of cause of accident inserted on October 13. The cited source is the NTSB Report which does not conclude that the ignition source is disputed.
• 07:0007:00, 13 October 2024 diff hist +8‎ TWA Flight 800 ‎ →Fuel quantity indication system: Restored missing word.
• 06:2906:29, 13 October 2024 diff hist +8‎ TWA Flight 800 ‎ →Fuel quantity indication system: Restored missing word.

12 October 2024

• 07:2207:22, 12 October 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Nina Murdoch ‎ →Biography: Unencyclopaedic to use a pronoun at the first mention of the subject in a section. current
• 02:4902:49, 12 October 2024 diff hist +1‎ Mordechai Gutnick ‎ →Biography: Sentence construction current
• 01:2601:26, 12 October 2024 diff hist +2‎ Cistern ‎ →top: A cistern may hold potable or fresh water from a source other than rainwater collected from a roof. current
• 01:1201:12, 12 October 2024 diff hist +33‎ McLaren MP4/11 ‎ →top: This article needs additional citations for verification. current

11 October 2024

• 12:4112:41, 11 October 2024 diff hist +1,069‎ Talk:Quadratic function ‎ →The lead needs substantial reworking to make it more broadly understandable: Reply to D. Lazard Tag: Reply
• 12:0912:09, 11 October 2024 diff hist −4‎ Schleicher ASK 21 ‎ →Design and development: Adjusted a paragraph to show chronological order.
• 11:1511:15, 11 October 2024 diff hist +1,025‎ Talk:Quadratic function ‎ →The lead needs substantial reworking to make it more broadly understandable: new section Tag: New topic

10 October 2024

• 21:0421:04, 10 October 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Dressing (medicine) ‎ →top: restored missing word current
• 20:5620:56, 10 October 2024 diff hist −131‎ m User talk:Philburgers ‎ Removed email from public view. current Tag: Manual revert
• 12:1812:18, 10 October 2024 diff hist +6‎ m Edward Woodward (judge) ‎ →Honours: Unencyclopaedic to use a pronoun at the first mention of the subject in a section. current
• 12:1312:13, 10 October 2024 diff hist +34‎ List of Old Melburnians ‎ →Victoria Cross recipients: The section is titled “Victoria Cross recipients”. No need to state that each individual was awarded the VC. current
• 12:0812:08, 10 October 2024 diff hist +42‎ List of Old Melburnians ‎ →Victoria Cross recipients: The section is titled “Victoria Cross recipients”. There is no need to state that each individual won the VC.
• 11:5811:58, 10 October 2024 diff hist +19‎ William Joynt ‎ →First World War: Divided a long sentence into two. current
• 06:4906:49, 10 October 2024 diff hist −35‎ HMS Comet (1822) ‎ →top: Refinements to two sentences. current
• 06:1706:17, 10 October 2024 diff hist 0‎ Royal Navy ‎ →World War I: Refined a sentence to clarify that “without the loss of a single life” does not refer to “the beginning of the war”.
• 04:1504:15, 10 October 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Guy Gaunt ‎ →Political career: wikilinked current
• 04:1204:12, 10 October 2024 diff hist −19‎ Richard Cruise ‎ →Likenesses: Resolved potential ambiguity by removing three redundant words. “Cruise in its collections”? current
• 04:0404:04, 10 October 2024 diff hist −1‎ Guy Gaunt ‎ →Naval career: restored chronological order.
• 02:4102:41, 10 October 2024 diff hist +11‎ William Bridges (general) ‎ →Early life: Copy edit. To be a sentence, a subject is required.
• 02:2202:22, 10 October 2024 diff hist −6‎ List of Old Melburnians ‎ →Military and security: Corrected Cole’s rank on retirement from the RAAF.
• 01:1801:18, 10 October 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Magnus effect ‎ Adjusted some of the spaces at the beginning and end of sections for consistency. current

9 October 2024

• 05:0805:08, 9 October 2024 diff hist −27‎ Cavalieri's principle ‎ →History: Rationalised image caption.

8 October 2024

• 22:1022:10, 8 October 2024 diff hist +24‎ Comper Swift ‎ →Survivors: When? Inserted citation needed. current
• 21:4721:47, 8 October 2024 diff hist +4‎ Airspeed Ambassador ‎ →Aircraft on display: Syntax. The section is titled Aircraft on display, not Aircraft that have been restored. current
• 11:4811:48, 8 October 2024 diff hist +81‎ Ice giant (disambiguation) ‎ →top: Clarification of the expression “ice giant” when applied to our solar system. Tag: Reverted
• 11:4411:44, 8 October 2024 diff hist −9‎ m Ice giant ‎ →top: Erased two redundant words. Unencyclopaedic. current
• 06:0706:07, 8 October 2024 diff hist +13‎ War emergency power ‎ →WEP in World War II aircraft: Changed presentation of information about an increase in maximum engine power. current

7 October 2024

• 22:1422:14, 7 October 2024 diff hist −55‎ Torricelli's law ‎ →Experimental verification: Spouting can experiment: Erased unsatisfactory sentence. The intended information is provided more correctly in the next sentence. current
• 12:3412:34, 7 October 2024 diff hist +105‎ Torricelli's law ‎ →Derivation: Inserted inline citation.
• 10:1810:18, 7 October 2024 diff hist −4‎ m Simon Holmes à Court ‎ →Personal life: Erased redundant word “the”. current
• 04:4904:49, 7 October 2024 diff hist +27‎ Ram ‎ →Other uses in science and technology: Inserted relative atomic mass (RAM) current
• 01:1201:12, 7 October 2024 diff hist +66‎ Party horn ‎ Inserted See also and Bourdon tube. current
• 00:4500:45, 7 October 2024 diff hist +33‎ N Measurement of pressure ‎ New redirect current Tag: New redirect

6 October 2024

• 21:5121:51, 6 October 2024 diff hist +33‎ Torricelli's law ‎ →top: refimprove banner
• 21:4621:46, 6 October 2024 diff hist −7‎ m Torricelli's law ‎ →Torricelli's original derivation: Format of inline citation.
• 21:2121:21, 6 October 2024 diff hist +20‎ Ohm's law ‎ →top: Wikilink to clarify the meaning of “between two points” in an electric circuit. current
• 03:3303:33, 6 October 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Colloid ‎ Reverted grammatical error by 168.149.206.170 (talk) current Tag: Undo

5 October 2024

• 05:4905:49, 5 October 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Colombian Air Force One ‎ →Boenig 707: Spelling of sub-heading. current